I love you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shole, May 15, 2011.


  1. Level 2 Mingler 20%

    You don't need to reply
    Your love is enough for me
    I keep you in my heart
    You are more beautiful then art
    I might be far away from you
    But my heart is always near you
    Before you came in my life my soule was dark as the night
    Now with you its brighter then the light
    Sometimes we fight
    We brake up
    We make up
    But thats all right
    Because ill hold you thight when ever i can
    We understand each other without words
    Even though our minds are two separate worlds
    But thats love for me and you
    And i am glad that i found you
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    Awww did you write this when you were in love.
    It's very nice indeed.

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    Agreed its a very nice peom ;-)

  3. Level 2 Mingler 20%

    Actually I am still in love with that person(my gf :D ) :) and yeah I wrote it when I was in love
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    Awwww thats sweet :D

  5. Level 3 Mingler 40%

    A very nice piece...Yes, I agree you wrote it when you are in love...:)

  6. Level 2 Mingler 20%

    It was kinda special for her written because I go to school in another city 250km apart from her(she lives in my home town ) and I kinda wanted to make her not think much about me cheating on her or such bad things :)
    Not saying that I cheated on her but she assumed it a few times but I didn't because I don't cheat on the person I love .

  7. Level 2 Mingler 20%

    Very nice poem, so sweeet!!!:) You must love your girlfriend a lot! I am sure that your girlfriend would trust you even more after you send her this poem!

  8. Level 2 Mingler 20%

    Yep I sent her this poem long time ago :D Ill post now the other poem i wrote for her :D

  9. Level 2 Mingler 20%

    She should really see this thread in this forum. She would definitely be very touched! Did she say anything after she read this forum ( you don't have to answer this question, i am just being nosey :D). Good luck! Her heart would be yours soon!

  10. Level 2 Mingler 20%

    Its already my anyhow :D I don't show her the forums I post my poems in I usually send her a text or a pm on facebook :D

  11. Level 3 Mingler 40%

    Wish all guys are like you.:D. Yes, it is not good to cheat to someone that you love. That's what I am thinking, why waste your time to if you're only planning to play and cheat your partner. Tell her/him frankly what you feel and leave. No need to hide in the dark and cheat.:)

  12. Level 2 Mingler 20%

    Agreed :D I mean cheating hurts more then a rejection (knowing that from past experiences )

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